tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post7135353990398582023..comments2024-03-04T02:09:30.979-06:00Comments on One Man's Pony Ramblings: When is a Story Done?Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-6072420780272440652014-07-15T09:13:20.398-05:002014-07-15T09:13:20.398-05:00Anytime I pick up one of my older stories, I'm...Anytime I pick up one of my older stories, I'm liable to make some changes. It's almost never anything to the actual plot, but I'll find a sentence that doesn't sit well with me, and I'll rework it until it sounds better. There are always plenty of small choices that I made at the time that I think I can improve on. To this end, a story like <i>A Door Jam</i> reads a lot better now than it did when I originally wrote it, but the essential story hasn't changed. xjuggernaughtxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12286896058684660654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-67001790715933986042014-07-15T00:07:11.193-05:002014-07-15T00:07:11.193-05:00Hence why I never read the most recent version. Po...Hence why I never read the most recent version. Possibly one of my biggest peeves is attempting to shoehorn in continuity from after a story has been started just to stay current, and that is exactly what happened with that revision.DannyJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273313206696087395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-89323616231561374232014-07-14T20:22:30.795-05:002014-07-14T20:22:30.795-05:00I don't edit stories after I publish them (sav...I don't edit stories after I publish them (save for minor, easily corrected and obvious mistakes), but it doesn't have anything to do with a fear of disrespecting readers or such noble reasons. It's simply because at a certain point I get burned out on my stories, and would rather simply be done with it and move on. And usually that burn-out happens quite quickly, like right after the major editing phase just before I post a story.<br /><br />Besides, with my stories there's always a clear point where very few people are looking at it, at which point it really isn't worth the energy to re-write it.John Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01440476810236159695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-66551714321453907582014-07-14T17:33:48.367-05:002014-07-14T17:33:48.367-05:00Hi. :D
You're not missing much in Past Sins, ...Hi. :D<br /><br />You're not missing much in <i>Past Sins</i>, Shining and Cadence are the "obvious shoehorning" I often refer to in conversations like this. You have to look to side fics for more about them, as I am currently.Present Perfecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16195959811544391904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-71497554956344283542014-07-14T16:51:59.161-05:002014-07-14T16:51:59.161-05:00Often I make big changes in the month after publis...Often I make big changes in the month after publishing a story. "Corpse Bride", "Long Distance", & "Moments" had major rewrites after publishing. Sometimes I add chapters later; when the story isn't episodic, this can look odd. I'll still polish a story at any time, rewording things, but not usually rewrite it after the first few months. Writing is story is like growing it; rewriting after it's solidified is like doing surgery. You may leave scars. It's hard to remember all the things that needed blending together.Bad Horsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10735227563256689679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-53633274848176174672014-07-14T10:26:34.023-05:002014-07-14T10:26:34.023-05:00I think it varies over time.
One of the great st...I think it varies over time. <br /><br />One of the great strengths of online publishing is instant feedback. So if initial reactions lead an author to believe something needs fixing they should feel free to change it. But after a certain amount of time has passed (three or four weeks?) there shouldn't be any major changes made. <br /><br />Once a story has been out for a few months the only things that ought to be changed are spelling, grammar, and other such minor mistakes. The kind of things that as ProfessorOats said the readers are going to be mentally correcting anyway.<br /><br />So kind of like spoilers, but in reverse.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-9149613356362096972014-07-14T10:08:00.849-05:002014-07-14T10:08:00.849-05:00I am in favour of editing completed stories, withi...I am in favour of editing completed stories, within reason. I believe that to show respect to one's readers, an author is obligated to make their story the best experience for those readers that they can. However, this is done in two different ways. The first is in preserving the experience of those who read the story the first time and liked it how they read it, and the second is in accomodating potential future readers. So you have to strike a balance.<br /><br />Pen Stroke took one extreme end of the spectrum. He wanted to (understandably) apply all the feedback he'd gotten and create a story that was better than his original piece. This is good in a sense, because <i>Past Sins</i> is a famous fic that will probably keep attracting new readers for as long as the fandom exists. If people are gonna keep discovering the fic and reading it, better that they read his best attempt than a version that a reader will enjoy less. Where this gets problematic is that he changed the whole plot. He did not respect previous readers. I read the whole fic, and it took me a damn long time. Now the version currently on FimFiction is a completely different story, and that's the version that its sequels follow. When reading those sequels, I just have to shrug and accept that this universe now has Shining Armor in it, even though I remember nothing of the sort, because there's no way that I'm spending that amount of time to read the whole thing AGAIN just to familiarise myself with the differences.<br /><br />Taking a look at the other end of the spectrum, we have authors like Kkat. Kkat is aware of the flaws in FO:E, but has chosen not to do anything to so much as touch them. The rationalisation is, of course, that this way, every reader will have a consistent experience and that the story will always be exactly as a reader remembers it, with no more or no less. And this is fair, but this is also taken to an extreme, to the point that Kkat refuses to even correct spelling or grammar mistakes, which can only lead to an objectively worse experience for a reader, even if those are minor flaws. And if you're the kind of reader who will find more <i>major</i> flaws in the fic (Hi, Present Perfect!), then, well, you're shit out of luck, because there will never be a better version of the story than what we've got.<br /><br />So we strike a balance. We do our editing, we fix mistakes, we close plotholes and we undo terrible decisions if they don't have too much of a ripple effect, and we hopefully leave off with a better story that nobody is required to re-read to understand anything. Because I don't know about you guys, but personally, I'd not dare inflict my first ponyfic in its original state on anybody else here. It's not even that great NOW.<br />DannyJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273313206696087395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-71729556487957025352014-07-14T09:26:24.662-05:002014-07-14T09:26:24.662-05:00I often think I should go back and rewrite my olde...I often think I should go back and rewrite my oldest story, but A) it's not like anyone's ever read it, and B) bringing it in line with my current ability would also require removing large chunks of the story, since it isn't canon, never was, and was more or less conceived based on faulty understanding of the show. :B That said, there is at least one story in my gallery that I plan on rewriting, because it just didn't work the way I wanted it to, and I've got designs on turning it into a trilogy.<br /><br />But mostly, once I've published something, I only change typos.Present Perfecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16195959811544391904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-73432209763980420712014-07-14T08:51:06.298-05:002014-07-14T08:51:06.298-05:00Misspellings, grammatical errors and AJ's acce...Misspellings, grammatical errors and AJ's accent* are all fair game, since the readers are going to mentally correct those themselves anyway<br /><br />* Seriously, why do people write her so horribly?! The fic I'm currently reading has her saying "ta" instead of "the". When has she ever done that in the show?Holly Oatshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01703437987958922954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-81963327713425424452014-07-14T08:45:37.434-05:002014-07-14T08:45:37.434-05:00There's only one story I plan to rewrite. That...There's only one story I plan to rewrite. That may well come after this fandom has run its course, since I'd like to get new stories done as a priority, but I'll do it anyway. Other than that, I'll only correct typos or change two or three paragraphs to clarify something that readers were missing.<br /><br />Definitely, you can't keep going over a story, because you'll always find something you want to change, particularly if you have editing help. And the more you rely on that help, the more you have a story that satisfies your most recent reviewer. Really, a story will be tailor-made to suit one person's tastes, and that person should be the author, but as that author gains experience and discretion, he can make something that has a broad enough appeal that enough people will find it almost perfectly suits their tastes. And that's close enough.Pascoitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05861834765162800926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-28277638701694893472014-07-14T02:31:00.493-05:002014-07-14T02:31:00.493-05:00My personal preference is to simply move on to the...My personal preference is to simply move on to the next story. I expect that Somber's Project Horizons will never be done. A million word story both being written and being edited? Even if he actually gets to the end he'll have probably two editing waves traveling through it. I bet that the creativity and effort of the editing could have been used to put out several complete stories. <br /><br />So I'm of the side of the debate that argues for just finishing a story and moving to the next project. No artistic work is ever going to be perfect, there will always be something to tweak if you focus hard enough on it. Not to mention that an author is going to change over time anyway. Not that I'm completely opposed to editing old works. I just think that there should be a considerable period of time between finishing and any editing. Enough for an author to get some space and work on some other things.<br /><br />I'm also of the opinion that once a story gets tossed out to readers and fans it's no longer solely the author's. Once readers have read it, enjoyed it, shared it. Well, who are you to say that what they enjoyed isn't good enough? Just, as authors should always do, try to make the next story better.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com