tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post4397595625725370525..comments2024-03-04T02:09:30.979-06:00Comments on One Man's Pony Ramblings: Mini-Reviews Round 60Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-67709958235501838152014-12-05T15:20:51.545-06:002014-12-05T15:20:51.545-06:00It started out the same way for me, honestly--and ...It started out the same way for me, honestly--and I <i>did</i> enjoy the tone in the part you read. Unfortunately, the ending goes a very different, less pleasant direction.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581572699330155065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-30527771583466558962014-11-26T10:43:26.987-06:002014-11-26T10:43:26.987-06:00I can't honestly say that I noticed that issue...I can't honestly say that I noticed that issue in <i>Not In Bluff</i>, but I think it's not really as out of place from my perspective as it is from yours. For me, I think the mere fact that Iron Will was the runt in that little training camp <i>would</i> lead him to naturally empathise more with ponies, and cause his social attitudes to drift more in that direction. Perhaps I'm being too lenient in that, but I thought it worked.DannyJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273313206696087395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-56317049669081903632014-11-26T07:21:31.522-06:002014-11-26T07:21:31.522-06:00I found PPP fun and an interesting concept, though...I found PPP fun and an interesting concept, though I agree that the interpersonal dramas were hyped up a bit much. That said, I never got to the ending or the resolution of the minor conflicts, as it only had three chapters finished when I read it. For me, it was more about glossing over those conflicts and enjoying its tone.Pascoitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05861834765162800926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-4364465070313142892014-11-26T06:32:17.653-06:002014-11-26T06:32:17.653-06:00Looks like the stress is affecting your writing
1...Looks like the stress is affecting your writing<br /><br />1) That first sentence is potentially confusing. Maybe you should move "not" outside of the quotation marks<br /><br />2) "... or at least give me the opportunity to <b>get come</b> back to work feeling relaxed and confident..." Pick one, you can't have both<br /><br />Hope you feel better soon, and enjoy your Thanksgiving<br /><br />Hope the rest of you guys enjoy yours as well. Happy Food Day, everyone!Holly Oatshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01703437987958922954noreply@blogger.com