tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post214435212907108612..comments2024-03-04T02:09:30.979-06:00Comments on One Man's Pony Ramblings: 6-Star Reviews Part 26: Twilight OctoberUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-34434411357706268732012-01-07T13:05:46.584-06:002012-01-07T13:05:46.584-06:00I've done a little rewording based on your com...I've done a little rewording based on your comments to hopefully make them (the first one in particular) a bit better. Twilight October was the second story I wrote so there's certainly no argument from me about the writing needing work.<br /><br />Once again your review has resulted in an improved story for any future readers.<br />Thank you very much!uSeahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12374805289097672052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-66091509139848679012012-01-04T21:15:40.788-06:002012-01-04T21:15:40.788-06:00Heh! I loved reading this one, it was so much fun...Heh! I loved reading this one, it was so much fun.zaptiftunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17738800404700049063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-41575034110562069152012-01-04T15:20:08.822-06:002012-01-04T15:20:08.822-06:00Sorry, the text sometimes does that when I copy-pa...Sorry, the text sometimes does that when I copy-paste quotes in and forget to reformat. I've got it fixed now (I think).<br /><br />Also, I'm sorry you're finding my story difficult to review. Just one more reason I decided to sluff the responsibility of doing it myself :)Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581572699330155065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8184562969471581744.post-70341965285539239732012-01-04T14:03:34.320-06:002012-01-04T14:03:34.320-06:00Great review, but what's with the suddenly hug...Great review, but what's with the suddenly huge text in the second to last paragraph under Thoughts After Reading? It gives me a headache.<br /><br />Also, why does your story have to be the hardest to review? I read the whole thing, found each ending, and I have no clue how to review it.Brittanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15001887711091590137noreply@blogger.com